Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, August 8, 2012

The Lord Moves In Mysterious Ways




her entire life
had crumbled

an uneasy feeling
gripped her as she
mesmerically drawn to
the train tracks
set her plan in motion

not taking into account
the Lord moves in
mysterious ways

15 comments:

  1. oh heck...that is unbelievable...hopefully that makes her re-think and embrace life again.. my daughter was lately driving back from university by train when they had to stop the train because of someone who took their life on the tracks..happens way too often

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  2. Yes, I thought it was an amazing piece of footage.

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  3. omg....determination or otherwise that had to scare the crap out of her...i hope she appreciates the new lease on life....

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  4. Great poem, and tied in wonderfully with the video.

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  5. Indeed , Lord intervenes...yes, she need to live with greater hope..thanks.. I am here for 3WW..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/08/uneasy-bond-cracks.html

    RS:)

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  6. The lord does indeed move in mysterious way hopefully she will appreciate the gift given to her now.

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  7. OMGoodness... it so wasn't her time to go, was it? Yes, the Lord moves in mysterious ways. What a piece of footage and a lovely poem to go with it. Wow...I do hope she knows how lucky she is to be alive and it changes her life for the better now.

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  8. There's a lot going for her. Hopefully she realized the folly! Nice write Rallen!

    Hank

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  9. I can't see the image, but I love the poem.

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  10. Shame flipside...it makes more sense with the video.

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  11. Strong write, Rallentanda. If only we could come to grips with mystery and the fact that we are not alone in all of this!

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  12. unbelievable ..... how horrible when someone feels absolutely no hope....

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  13. Analyzing this I think she must have changed her mind at the last minute to lay down in the safe place between the tracks. Lucky too that with the length of the train she was not sucked up in its pull. Hope she received help to sort her problems out.

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  14. wow...that is absolutely insane. you captured this mystery well.

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  15. Well written, a very dramatic event to be sure. We all hope for her.

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