it is the last day
no more attempts at haiku
ah free free at last
footloose fancy free
i want to be somewhere else
for a little while
i'm free as the breeze
to blow puffs of clouds across
the vast night blue sky
a free lunch you say
no such thing everyone knows
you pay and you pay
Yes, "it is the last day". I've enjoyed sharing this challenge with you. Now I, too, am ready for a rest from Haiku. We will be "footloose fancy free" somewhere else :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat series of haiku on free, thank you for sharing these.
ReplyDeleteI feel such a cheat entering on the last day. But it was good to find you here.
ReplyDeleteOK oldegg,to make amends you should write 29 Haiku before breakfast:)
ReplyDeleteI am ready for a rest from haiku also! But thanks for a great month! :-)
ReplyDeleteA rest from haiku! I can appreciate that!
ReplyDeleteI feel much the same way, especially as the first three verses, but I still believe in free lunches occasionally too...
ReplyDeleteLovely set....I enjoyed third one most!
ReplyDeletePeace in prison
Thank you to Leo and everyone for a fun haiku month.
ReplyDeleteWhere, I wonder, is that somewhere else that you would rather be...
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nice and beautiful set..
ReplyDeleteWas under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge ...
Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS...being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull's eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world...Loads of special thanks to each one of you...September had been very exciting and a learning month for me...I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure ...Thanks a lot once again...keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly...
I've enjoyed reading your and everyone else's haiku over the past 30 days, but I agree with you. I need a break from haiku for a while. Thank you for your visits. I appreciate it.
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