Deep and emotional, that's how I will describe this haiku set...http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/01/12/death-metal-haiku/
Beautiful and a little disturbing. great write.
There are many little deaths and you describe one so well!
The sure sense of finality---yet something beyond,,,well done,,
Beautiful set...I liked the second most!Fragrant memories
different levels of meaning here.....you always get me thinking!
The second haiku is fantabulous.
brilliant, I'm trying to write my first haiku today
deep! I loved both of them."http://beyondwoman.blogspot.in/2013/01/demise-of-birthday.html"
Thank you for your commentsNorth West burns todayDear Lord please send rain OKAll we can do is Pray!
Deep and emotional, that's how I will describe this haiku set...
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Beautiful and a little disturbing. great write.
ReplyDeleteThere are many little deaths and you describe one so well!
ReplyDeleteThe sure sense of finality---yet something beyond,,,well done,,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set...I liked the second most!
ReplyDeleteFragrant memories
different levels of meaning here.....you always get me thinking!
ReplyDeleteThe second haiku is fantabulous.
ReplyDeletebrilliant, I'm trying to write my first haiku today
ReplyDeletedeep! I loved both of them.
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Thank you for your comments
ReplyDeleteNorth West burns today
Dear Lord please send rain OK
All we can do is Pray!