What we have here are 2 examples of a different cinquain form - one that is based on word count, not syllable count. The form is 1,2,3,4,1 in words - and you've done it perfectly :-)
Dodo ,behave!...This is a highly intellectual blog.It has nothing to do with viagra. Cosmo is a very sensitive scientist so please probe him with care!He conducts kissing experiments on women for the Government I think.
I will soon be without gainful employment. The new Pope declined my application to establish a new wandering evangelising order specialising in song and dancing girls. So, if Cosmo is looking to hire subjects for future experiments my fees are very reasonable. Oh, and I have been told (repeatedly) I am a warm and passionate kisser.
Dodo I do not know if Cosmo is recruiting at the moment. As for probing Cosmo...that is a figure of speech meaning searching for information.sometimes I wonder what goes on in that noodle of yours.
Nah. The quieter types just play a long game with all that silence and "still waters run deep" nonsense. Before you know it, women will want flowers and chocolates and .... romance.
I miss being bad is that bad? I miss seeing me being bad is that bad? And, most of all, I miss making other people bad now, I know this is bad! How bad is that?
Well Doddles darling you did opt for sainthood and this is the price.Perhaps this blog is meant to test your strength of faith. Now off you go, put on some sack cloth lined with some nice rose thorns and chill out with a small dose of flagellation:)
Heard that the new Pope lines up to get his hair cut at the markets and has tossed his red Pope shoes. Well that's it..he has lost the middle class female vote of confidence.Off to a bad start as far as I am concerned!
Both you and Cosmo have been very recalcitrant. I am sentencing you to one week as dance instructors on Dancing with the Stars..Partners will be Amanda Vanstone and Baroness Warsi.
Careful with those bad boys
ReplyDeletethere is just something about bad boys eh? and somethings never change....syllable count is a bit off to what tony directed us
ReplyDeleteoh dear
Deletemy syllables are wrong
should i be put on detention
or sent to the back of the class
sorry sir
What we have here are 2 examples of a different cinquain form - one that is based on word count, not syllable count. The form is 1,2,3,4,1 in words - and you've done it perfectly :-)
DeleteThank you so much Tony.Hopefully I will be spared the banishment to the Dead Poets society:)
DeleteToo late now Brudberg.As my mother said, the world is made up of good men and interesting ones:)
ReplyDeleteYou need to watch the goody-two-shoe types, sucking up to all and sundry. Besides, bad boys aren't really bad, they're just misunderstood.
Delete“Every girl wants a Bad Boy who is good only for her and every guy wants a Good Girl who is bad only for him.”
(Evette Carter)
That sort ( in both genders) has always loathed me I am happy to say!
DeleteWe dull ones just watch and smirk.
ReplyDeleteWho said you were dull? It must have been one of those ladies you have been using for your science experiments.
DeleteAh, yes, THOSE ladies! A wonderful example of an exothermic reaction.
DeleteSimple English please!
DeleteWhen I Googled it, all became clear: "reactants → products + energy."
Dodo ,behave!...This is a highly intellectual blog.It has nothing to do with viagra. Cosmo is a very sensitive scientist so please probe him with care!He conducts kissing experiments on women for the Government I think.
DeleteInteresting!
DeleteI will soon be without gainful employment. The new Pope declined my application to establish a new wandering evangelising order specialising in song and dancing girls. So, if Cosmo is looking to hire subjects for future experiments my fees are very reasonable. Oh, and I have been told (repeatedly) I am a warm and passionate kisser.
Ps
DeleteMadam, I absolutely have NO intention of probing Cosmo. How dare you?!
DFAT
DeleteDodo I do not know if Cosmo is recruiting at the moment. As for probing Cosmo...that is a figure of speech meaning searching for information.sometimes I wonder what goes on in that noodle of yours.
DeleteDFAT.. Department of Foreign Affairs And Trading
There's a PhD in this...
DeleteWhy is it that the girls always go for the loud, bad boys. We quieter types have so much more to offer you know :-)
ReplyDeleteThe quieter types are the worse!
DeleteNah. The quieter types just play a long game with all that silence and "still waters run deep" nonsense. Before you know it, women will want flowers and chocolates and .... romance.
DeleteOne of life's great mysteries: Why do bad boys want good girls (unless its Uma, of course)?
ReplyDeleteAsk Cosmo!
DeleteCosmo - the answer is?
Deletehaha..i had my fair share of bad boys... think i'm a bit tamer nowadays...smiles
ReplyDeleteDon't believe it!
DeleteOh. Rats!
DeleteSorry Claudia...It's the full moon here...Cosmo always starts howling around this time.
DeleteOwooooo...
DeleteI miss being bad
ReplyDeleteis that bad?
I miss seeing me being bad
is that bad?
And, most of all, I miss making other people bad
now, I know this is bad!
How bad is that?
Well Doddles darling you did opt for sainthood and this is the price.Perhaps this blog is meant to test your strength of faith. Now off you go, put on some sack cloth lined with some nice rose thorns and chill out with a small dose of flagellation:)
DeleteI have been "born gain" or, as we Catholics prefer to render the Greek, "regenerated from above".
DeleteAs Shakespeare said "it is greek to me"
DeleteHeard that the new Pope lines up to get his hair cut at the markets and has tossed his red Pope shoes. Well that's it..he has lost the middle class female vote of confidence.Off to a bad start as far as I am concerned!
I'm in a naughty mood. Apologies for lowering the tone of this terribly serious blog.
ReplyDeleteBoth you and Cosmo have been very recalcitrant. I am sentencing you to one week as dance instructors on Dancing with the Stars..Partners will be Amanda Vanstone and Baroness Warsi.
DeleteBecause Dodo has been the worst offender he has to partner Archdeacon Alison Taylor, Brisbane's first female Bishop as well.
DeleteSo long as she understands that, being the man, I take the lead and she follows.
DeleteI don't think it works that way anymore.
DeleteWell, I'm NOT wearing a dress!
DeleteDancing...??
ReplyDelete" And we should consider every day lost if we have not danced at least once "
ReplyDeleteNietzsche