Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, December 7, 2013

Haiku Heights





rivulets of spray
saturated his long beard
merry xmas all





all of them well earned
rivulets on a parched land
wrinkles- life's imprint




it was killing him
pretending not to notice
her wet rivulets

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14 comments:

  1. Eliz FrankDecember 7, 2013 at 8:19 AM

    Lovely message for the holidays... :-) Couldn't find your haiku post on Rainbow. Happy Holidays!
    Eliz

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  2. kalpana solsiDecember 8, 2013 at 9:08 AM

    loved the Santa Claus haiku.

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  3. The Write GirlDecember 8, 2013 at 5:02 PM

    A beautiful pairing of haiku and images.

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  4. Reading PleasureDecember 9, 2013 at 5:23 AM

    Wonderful bouquet, dear friend. All very well done and meaningful. I like the erotic undertone of the last one!

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  5. PealogicDecember 9, 2013 at 5:29 AM

    Loving the haiku ( what is the plural?). Amazing what you can do with so few words.

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  6. PealogicDecember 9, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    Each of these were brilliant. I just can't choose a favourite.

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  7. Siggi in Downeast MaineDecember 9, 2013 at 4:13 PM

    Awesome takes on the prompt !
    Thank you
    Peace
    Siggi

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  8. AnonymousDecember 10, 2013 at 2:00 AM

    odd sight to behold
    santa came down my chimney
    on a fast surfboard

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  9. rallentandaDecember 10, 2013 at 3:10 AM

    on your to do list
    must surf in a santa suit
    for Christmas next year:)

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  10. UnknownDecember 10, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Oh so brilliant. Especially the third one. :)

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  11. ReshmaDecember 10, 2013 at 4:43 PM

    Lovely trio, each flows in a different direction yet creates a lasting impression, esp the second and the last one...

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  12. LocomenteDecember 10, 2013 at 11:37 PM

    Each one outshines another...
    Lovely!!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

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  13. AnonymousDecember 11, 2013 at 11:50 AM

    All three are fine. LOVE the surfin santa.

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  14. UnknownDecember 13, 2013 at 10:45 PM

    Very cute Haaiku. I like Santa's beard drenched with rivulets.

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