Rallentanda

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Saturday, February 8, 2014

Haiku Heaven 1




Word for Saturday February 8   "  hole "

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are joining in writing a haiku based on the prompt. Cheers.




too many die here
diving straight in ,not thinking
happens too often




a hole in the heart
one can be born with it or
one can acquire it




sun spots sun death rays
there's a hole in the ozone
and who put it there


27 comments:

  1. new prompt down under
    turning the world on its head
    but what is a HO7E

    let's dig a hole
    through the center of the earth
    send down a bO3W

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    1. HO7E
      is an aussie code breaker
      you need the password

      jules verne wont like it
      a bO3W?
      sounds a little strange

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    2. sounds a little strange
      bO3W lands on it's feet
      and becomes a POEM

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    3. i should look it up
      too lazy to google it
      sound nigerian

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  2. to fill a big hole
    take shovel and move some dirt
    now must fill new hole

    every love that's lost
    . . . . . . .
    leaves a gaping hole

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  3. every love that's lost
    is remembered and grieved for
    leaves a gaping hole

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    1. thank God you took up
      the mantle after Leo left
      fill that gaping hole

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    2. leaves a gaping hole
      impossible to be filled
      as hard as you try

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    3. sleek bodies tortured
      sore itchy red spots in fur
      weasels with measles

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    4. weasles with measles
      highly contagious disease
      don't kiss the weasles

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    5. as hard as you try
      you can never forget a
      guy who can sing well

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  4. spitting weasel words
    to hide the hole in his soul
    he hopes to offend

    a hole in his head
    would end this self misery
    and give peace all round

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  5. that lacked charity
    this hollow hole in his soul
    should be filled with love

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  6. LOL....only God could love a weasel !

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    1. self-inflicted wound
      destined for hell hereafter
      unholy whole hole

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    2. self inflicted wound
      suffer the consequences
      and hope for the best

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  7. where is that bluebird
    the one that delivers mail
    stuck in mauritius?

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  8. In the wilderness
    Weasels will love a weasel
    When no-one else will.

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    1. i will never love
      a weasle even if i
      was one in the wild

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  9. how should i fill up
    the empty hole in my heart
    crush of a lifetime.

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    1. crush of a lifetime
      fancy,and at my age too
      who would have thought it

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  10. What a great idea, Rallentanda! Nice prompt, too. Sorry to have dropped out of site and been slow to post. Technical difficulties continue in the south of France.

    Here' the link to my post:

    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/02/09/empty-java-dreams/

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  11. spiteful words, nasty
    jibes, too much to take, survive,
    a hole in your heart

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  12. jibes too much to take
    will plug up my broken heart
    float it out to sea

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    1. float it out to sea
      let us see who gets there first
      race for survival

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  13. you will win i know
    i am a tortoise in the
    survival swim race

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