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Rallentanda

Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Narcissism



three word wednesday


there could be never enough
adulation
he was an authentic narcissus
with a phobia about missing out
on those few minnows which had
escaped the net cast wide

the crowd was
blinded by the dazzling sun which shone
from his dark nether regions
and as he enlisted the help of followers
to blow his horn
a blast could be heard all over the land
which would knock purple out of a rainbow




rendition of the rainbow minus the purple

20 comments:

  1. Knocking purple out of the rainbow..that good..i think he may raise my hackles.. ;)

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  2. I love the last line knocking purple out of the rainbow.

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  3. Sounds like an old fart to me. :D Wonderful look at narcissism.

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  4. Ah, "The Fawning Minnows", how I loved their work in the early years.

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    1. I auditioned for lead singer in that group. I didn't get the job because I didn't fawn satisfactorily:)

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    2. Nothing to do with fawnication, one assumes.

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    3. You assumed correctly...no casting couch antics for this little black duck!

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  5. He had probably the karizma, but nobody too close...

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    1. Someone with an ego of that proportion has no room for anyone else!

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    1. Tis called blowing your own trumpet:)

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    2. Perhaps it wasn't a trumpet. Was there a rainbow?

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  7. Yes I believe there was now that you mention it....Way up high it was:)

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  8. Knock purple out of the rainbow! Love dis line :-)

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  9. Great last line, but you really captured the whole "look at me" generation there ... good poem.

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  10. We'll call you. Next act please!!

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    1. Surprised..I though you would like this rendition!

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