Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, June 18, 2014

The North Shore


poetry jam


the spans finally joined up
but that is as far as it goes

ne'er the twain shall meet
chalk and cheese and
that suits everyone fine

some are bankrupting themselves
to get to the other side
others would only cross under sufferance

we look different
we sound different
we are different

one  side
represents colour and movement
kikes tykes and dykes

the other
a tree studded dormitory
the bastion of anglicanism
and all thing conservative



live and let live

26 comments:

  1. Any place with a river will have those different sides with its different values.. and the cost of crossing the bridge can be tremendous in many ways..

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  2. East of the Yarra. Yeah, I agree with Björn.

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  3. its is true for my city as well in Delhi one side of River Yamuna is rich and flamboyant yet the other side undeveloped almost rural!!

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  4. Interesting observation. Hopefully sometimes fate intervenes and blurs the limits between the two worlds. Love the quote at the end.

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  5. it is funny for me that often those that are most religeous are also the most bigoted...hateful people....and most unaccepting of others...

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    1. Because "religious" is not the same as "Christian".

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    2. What a bigoted comment about religious people!

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    3. sadly, that's been my experience too. the issue is that there's a huge difference between "religion" and "faith". "Religion" is the organized, prescribed, and enforced pattern of behavior and speech accompanying a belief system. Key term, "system". "Faith" is a person's belief and individual relationship with their God. So ... there's a solid reason why "religious" people can be the most bigoted and hateful. Lock-step and follow orders. But that's my two cents' worth anyway.

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  6. I've often heard the expression 'other side of the tracks' so maybe we also have to add 'other side of the bridge.'

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    1. When I drive over the bridge in one direction...my heart always sinks.

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  7. this is sad...bridge not bridging....

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  8. These lines really stand out for me:

    some are bankrupting themselves
    to get to the other side
    others would only cross under sufferance

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  9. When bridges became commonplace, they upset many applecarts!

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  10. yes, certainly bridges are crossed, yet definitely under various circumstances; a very serious write

    much love..

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  11. I'd happily stay on the undeveloped side of the river - Anglicanism or not. Amidst the tranquillity, there's plenty of colour and movement in traditional ways of life.

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    1. Yes...watching the goldfish going round and round in its bowl:)

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    2. Now you know poor 'Fish' has died and gone to goldfish heaven. Nowadays, I watch the cats play.

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    3. Too much excitement like this can be dangerous for a man of your age!

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  12. Bridges are built for traffic going in two directions, back and forth, in harmony ... at least that would be the ideal.

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  13. If only all bridges brought people together. Nice use of the prompt.

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  14. An excellent poem. Sad when we spend all this money and still fail to connect...love your quote about dancing, hadn't seen that before!

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  15. Great poem!
    Here in the USA, the two-party political system is our river. And it feels like "never the twain shall meet".

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  16. A straight-to-the-matter articulation of the differences that bridges can only bridge so far. An excellent take on Poetry Jam's prompt.

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  17. Awesome one! It shows that bridges aren't always a link between people, but sometimes they're a great divide... I liked your poem a lot!

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