let's stay together forever
i want to , so do you
no one will ever match like us
we should try, see it thru
oh yes
we'll stumble thru the mess
such fuss
and all the other crap
we are both crazy and clever
two misfits on the map
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Nicely done. Mr Herrick would be impressed. I am.
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of the form.
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating in our Real Toads Sunday Challenge.
I love it, so fluently done ~ Cheers to you ~
ReplyDeleteForever is such a long time.....
ReplyDeleteLike it and the form too. One Question. Do Aussie chicks say "Yuzz" and not "Yes"? Perhaps Jack is being too pedantic.
ReplyDelete*chuckle*
You are so dim....'us' rhymes with 'fuss'. Study the form and write one of these for your penance...awful Catholic boy!
ReplyDeleteOooops ..... a decade of the Rosary would be easier and more profitable - you 'modernist'!
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