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Friday, November 7, 2014

Georgia Koch's Early Morning




carpe diem


 early morning
silence before the rising sun
rain drops on a branch

windows steam up with warm breath
her finger writes ' good morning ' 

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10 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 7, 2014 at 8:41 PM

    Oh my that is just so romantic...melting anyone's heart.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 7, 2014 at 10:59 PM

    This is sweet - it really made me smile. Loved it :)

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  3. Adas AlcoveNovember 8, 2014 at 1:54 AM

    Very different take! Love it!

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  4. Gillena CoxNovember 8, 2014 at 5:11 AM

    this is really nice, luv how the silence resonates in your lines; thanks for dropping in at my blog

    much love...

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  5. UnknownNovember 8, 2014 at 7:11 AM

    Very beautiful and unique.

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  6. AnonymousNovember 8, 2014 at 9:23 AM

    oooh, I really like this unexpected direction.

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  7. brudbergNovember 8, 2014 at 1:14 PM

    Steamy windows.. what a night there...:-)

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    1. rallentandaNovember 8, 2014 at 3:22 PM

      Tsk...you're being terribly Swedish again Bjorn !

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  8. Bastet's Waka LibraryNovember 9, 2014 at 3:53 AM

    Nice ... really very very nice!

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 9, 2014 at 7:20 AM

    Lovely and full humor Rallentanda, very well written continuation ....

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