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Sunday, November 16, 2014

Haiku Horizons



the big freeze
on the outer
turn of events




kamikaze swimming
dive in embrace the ice
tingles and gasps


16 comments:

  1. Love the kamikaze swimming, LOL!!

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  2. I loved the first one.. short and crisp.. Lovely..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/11/moon-gives-cold-look.html

    RS

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  3. chilly words. Nicely done

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  4. The second one left me shivering and shaking..LOL
    Wonderful....

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  5. Oh my! I have heard of those polar bear dives. They even have one here in my home town to benefit charity. I must say I would never do that! LOL Great collection of haiku! ♥

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  6. "kamikaze swimming"! That's the best image created by words EVER!

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  7. Oh my! embrace the icy water and body turns numb...blue...I used to go for a swim in springtime a week after the ice left the lake just to impress my father....man was it cold!!

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  8. Great picture and poem with the guy in the ice water. Yikes.

    (Sorry. Blogger won't let me post as wordpress) Alice Keys

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  9. Please know that I read and enjoy your blog.

    I've been trying on and off for days (again over the months since I got back to the USA) to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittent and vanishing. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account to use for commenting on blogger accounts. But, alas, it doesn't link to me or my blog.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/

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