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Friday, December 12, 2014

For The weekend



frozen thoughts
bent swollen roaring
beneath the surface

frozen thoughts
remember eclipse
not sunlight (Birgitta)

dark clouds cool the ardour
of the silent winter's  night ( Rall)


3 comments:

  1. Very interesting --- a mysterious haiku with a mysterious accompaniment :)

    But there is a tension in this haiku -- frozen thoughts ready to explode ---

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  2. Ah those dark heavy clouds filled with snow.

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  3. Oooo ... what an ending ... but also a surprising beginning! Nice!

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