Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, August 8, 2015

For The Weekend



B&Ps Shadorma and Beyond MLMM

Shadorma

bitter wind
whistles through my ears
stinging cheeks
frosty curls
tendril round my frozen face
dreams of fur and fire

Lento abcb defe

freezing winter snap
no urge here for goin'
pull the fur up to my eyes
keep warm and watch the snowin'

a bleak and cold season
sad thoughts come to mind
sorrows rise to the surface
summer soon i'll find

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4 comments:

  1. UnknownAugust 8, 2015 at 8:11 AM

    Love the imagery--the icy curl, tendril round a frozen face... Well done on both the shardoma and lento :)

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  2. AnonymousAugust 8, 2015 at 1:03 PM

    there's always hope that summer will come

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  3. Bastet's Waka LibraryAugust 8, 2015 at 10:58 PM

    Bravo ... love reading these chilling words today ... still down right hot here and can't take much more off! Of course I'd not have liked them maybe quite as much, let's say in December ... Joking .. you did brilliantly here Rall - smooth and flowing rhymes and thanks for participating!

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  4. C.C.August 9, 2015 at 10:25 AM

    These three lines in your shadorma are divine:

    frosty curls
    tendril round my frozen face
    dreams of fur and fire

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