Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, August 23, 2015

Haiku Horizons 2



punctuation
imperative to meaning
grandma's brush with death





Brushing Doggie's Teeth
The New Must In Doggie Hygiene

anyone else notice
the world is getting madder
by the minute

don't try this with bluey
you'll be minus an arm plus
a few hundred sheep

13 comments:

  1. Oh dear! LOL!!!

    Did you ever see the Weird Al Yankovic video about "Word Crimes"? Your first haiku makes me think of that :)

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  2. No I haven't but I'll check it out on youtube....hope it's not too gruesome:)

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  3. both made me smile 😀

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  4. Both your contributions are hilarious, but the second is stupendous! Thanks for the laughter. Bluey thanks you too!

    Brushstrokes in Blue and Red

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  5. A world gone giddy...yes. Good statement.

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  6. A dangerous feat indeed...fun haiku that make me smile:)

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  7. now you made me laugh again after a saddened heart by your previous haiku - that's called magic !!!

    I have read some funny punctuation by the way ,maybe you have read this ,
    WOMAN ,WITHOUT HER ,MAN BECOMES WILD
    WOMAN ,WITHOUT HER MAN , BECOMES WILD

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    1. There is a book about punctuation called
      " Eats,shoots and leaves."
      Eats shoots and leaves:)

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  8. Love the punctuation ku and yes, I've noticed the world is getting decided more absurd. I enjoyed your post very much!

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