Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, February 7, 2016

Haiku Horizons: Heeding Haiku With Chevrefeuille.MLMM



Atlanta the Greek goddess, ran so fast she could outrun everyone. The Gods would only permit her to marry  a man ,who could beat her in the race. Melanion seriously smitten, decided to drop three heavy golden apples ,which he thought she could never resist picking up, in order to slow her down .Her feelings for Melanion were mutual, so she picked up the heavy apples. He won the race. Eventually Melanion offended the Gods and they were both turned into lions as a punishment. The ancient Greeks believed lions could only mate with leopards...Why? because Griks are little bit  crazy:)

he ran fast, she faster
sacrificed her precious gift
sad but typical




15 comments:

  1. Yes. Typical. Thanks for the myth-tory lesson.

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  2. She wanted him to have him all along, otherwise she would have been happy with two golden apples and still won the race. Trying to pick up the third apple made her see sense. However from the lion/leopard mating theory I am beginning to wonder like you if many of the ancient Greeks had much sense.

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  3. We owe them a lot. Read your history books.

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  4. Such an enjoyable haibun... I enjoyed the myth lesson :) Thank you!

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  5. Oh, we can learn so much from myths and their place in history. But it is a lesson we neglect.

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  6. Ach .. the Gods .. what a pain! Great haibun though. :-)

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  7. Very nice haibun Rall. I like this Greek mythology stories. And ... I hope you don't think all man are like Melanion ...

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  8. really enjoyed the story and your reflection on Greek mythology in your haiku

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  9. Nice story to go along with the haiku.

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    1. Ha...I had you in mind when I wrote that last bit:)

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