Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Monday, February 22, 2016

Haiku Horizons


not for me  - the folk
exploding like spiders 
across the stars

age brings to an end
yellow hot blazing candles
burn burn fabulous

i'd prefer to be
hiding under a carapace
with a gentle snail





7 comments:

  1. I prefer the gentle snail to the scary spider too..

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  2. I like that quote by JK. and can clearly see your point. I like the madness though.

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  3. wow... cute little snail... I love it too :-)

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  4. I enjoyed your haikus. ☺ As a gardener, I prefer the helpful pest eating arachnids over the destructive plant eating snails! 😜

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  5. I think I'd prefer to be an owl ... I'm not sure though, it might be more fun to be a cat ... I definitely don't want to be a Kerouac spider! Lovely haiku

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  6. powerful haiku series.. love it!

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