
time
is not always
on your side
Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

rain pelting down
on the umbrella leaves
protecting their buds

on a mountain top
meditating in silence
a monk searches for stars

floating down a river
her tresses caught in a summer breeze
last thoughts - she thinks of hamlet
shivering in snow
the little sparrow prays for
warmth and a blue sky

1. Time is rarely on your side.
ReplyDelete2. It feels a warm rain, for some reason.
3. Best place to look.
4. Sad.
5. Could be a wren.
A beautiful circle!
ReplyDeletefloating down a river
ReplyDeleteher tresses caught in a summer breeze
last thoughts - she thinks of hamlet
ooh, this one is my favorite
very cool, very cool
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ReplyDeleteI did not see the circle.
impressive
Lovely.
ReplyDeleteHamlet! Nice...
ReplyDeleteThe picture of the monk in meditation is very powerfully portrayed.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the mental picture created by the last haiku.
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