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Rallentanda

Thursday, October 20, 2016

Full Circle


time
is not always
on your side

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai



rain pelting down
on the umbrella leaves
protecting their buds



on a mountain top
meditating in silence
a monk searches for stars



floating down a river
her tresses caught in a summer breeze
last thoughts - she thinks of hamlet
















shivering in snow
the little sparrow prays for
warmth and a blue sky

8 comments:

  1. 1. Time is rarely on your side.
    2. It feels a warm rain, for some reason.
    3. Best place to look.
    4. Sad.
    5. Could be a wren.

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  2. A beautiful circle!

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  3. floating down a river
    her tresses caught in a summer breeze
    last thoughts - she thinks of hamlet

    ooh, this one is my favorite
    very cool, very cool

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  4. Thank you to rhymeswitbug.com.
    I did not see the circle.
    impressive

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  5. The picture of the monk in meditation is very powerfully portrayed.

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  6. I really enjoyed the mental picture created by the last haiku.

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