Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, May 14, 2017

First Line Friday - MLMM

-His world had been comprised of hastily constructed philosophies, which upon close examination, had failed him and promptly collapsed.



he resented her equilibrium
her steadfast unshakeable code
what better way to punish her
than by breaking her fingers
she was a pianist
he was already classified as mentally unstable
stamped and approved
convenient
could do anything he wanted
would never be held responsible
for his actions










14 comments:

  1. One can see an explosion brewing.

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  2. An excellent cause. Wish there wasn't a need for it.

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  3. Yes... the white ribbon campaign. Thank you

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  4. A noble cause.. god knows we need protection from such beasts.

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  5. Eww! That's a shocker. As it should be.

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  6. This speaks, in an eloquent way, to the importance of making wise choices.

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  7. Sometimes I wonder why those in charge of protecting others don't notice that many monsters hide behind the labels society gives them.

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  8. I don't know what to say... I'm flabbergasted. I agree with Sanaa about being protected - at the same tiem we must not let them get away with it.

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  9. It's so sad that causes like this one have to exist.

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  10. This hits close to home, as someone close to me is recovering from a sociopath. Public opinion is on his side, doesn't believe he could do what, in fact, he has done. The brutality of breaking a pianist's fingers.......oh my God.

    Rally, a question I asked you a few years ago. Is it still No? Need not be intense......

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  11. Thanks for this poetic revelation, well done Rall

    much love...

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  12. Hope he gets stopped, imprisoned, and treated badly by the other inmates who love their wives and mothers and girl friends.
    Nice write about a bad practice. Thank you,
    ..

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  13. This is a worthy cause that I wish we didn't need. Sad, deflating words for the sad, deflated world we inhabit.

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