Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Monday, August 14, 2017

Haiku Horizons

 Tanka

up up and away
in a blue sky fantasy
facebook futility
redefines 'banal' or 'trite'
not to mention 'vacuous'


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12 comments:

  1. JulianAugust 14, 2017 at 8:48 AM

    Very good.

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  2. JulianAugust 14, 2017 at 8:49 AM

    I agree, facebook futility. and the last stanza in the piece you posted really made me smile.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 14, 2017 at 9:39 AM

    I love this! :-)

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  4. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 15, 2017 at 7:26 AM

    How very ironic...

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  5. tonispencerAugust 15, 2017 at 9:46 AM

    I think I have maybe...12 friends on FB and I only have them because that is how the poetry group to which I belong communicates. FB..bah. Excellent irony!

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 15, 2017 at 12:45 PM

    Lol....hilarious.love the newspaper clipping.

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  7. MargaretAugust 15, 2017 at 8:47 PM

    Thanks for the laugh. So needed it!

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  8. ThotpurgeAugust 15, 2017 at 9:02 PM

    🙂🙂

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  9. AnonymousAugust 16, 2017 at 4:01 PM

    I needed to thank you for this wonderful read!!
    I definitely loved every little bit of it. I've got you saved as a
    favorite to look at new stuff you post…

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  10. Magaly GuerreroAugust 16, 2017 at 8:52 PM

    What Margaret said. Thanks a bunch. You rock!

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  11. AnonymousAugust 20, 2017 at 2:38 AM

    Wow ! Nice . Another wit from Rall !!!
    but tell me where did you get this abstract .
    ps please reply ! long time no chat .

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    1. rallentandaAugust 20, 2017 at 5:35 AM

      I found it on the internet.Sorry I have not visited you for a while, Milan.Things are not rosy in my life at the moment. I always write funny poetry when I am feeling sad.

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