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Monday, October 30, 2017

A Dope Fiend's Swan Song



laconic posturing on stage
wearing an ambiguous costume

imitating  a cantering pony
toying with the electrics on his guitar

singing in a self invented spare key
not mellisonant but
more of a tortuous wail

alienated his few remaining fans

adjurant suggestion
seek treatment
get the lockjaw sorted

Wordle 176  MLMM

2 comments:

  1. This was funny. It'll make a good 'cruel review' for an aspiring guitarist. :)

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  2. singing in a self invented spare key

    absolutely brilliant line - really crunches it together - :)

    wonderfully creative use of this week's wordle Rall - totally enjoyed your piece- thanks for playing along :)

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