Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Friday, June 1, 2018

Pale Moon


pale winter moon
in the sadness
of a cold late afternoon
the pool is empty
the gulls fight over scraps
the sky is fading pink
and now i must wait
wait until october

Poetry Pantry - Poets United



12 comments:

  1. beautiful.. I was looking at the same winter moon from my bedroom window last night. It rose late in my parts.

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  2. Sigh... there is such tender wistfulness here.

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  3. It is the start of the warm season where I live, but yes, I can understand the saddness of saying goodbye to one season to make room for another.

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  4. It is always sad (for me) when summer comes to an end and I know that another spring is SOOOO far away. This is one of my favorite poems of yours really.

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    1. Thank you. Each year it becomes harder to bear and we don't even have cold winters by northern hemisphere standards.

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  5. This is one of my favourites of yours as well. Winters are hard. Stay warm.

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  6. I'm in Florida now, but I remember that feeling well when I lived in Virginia. You captured it beautifully.

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  7. A beautiful wistful write. It is hard waiting for spring, for summer...
    Anna :o]

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  8. You've caught the bleakness well, and said it beautifully.

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  9. Waiting is never an easy game to play...

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