Such a delight!
What an intriguing and beautiful poem Rall. I read it first before playing the music only to find after how well the clip and music fitted the poem.
Old people need not lose their long-time loves, right?
Ooh, that first line invites you to be a spectator of this delightful dance and the musical accompaniment is such a perfect match.-HA
Such a beautiful description. I especially love "with the slow grace of a javanese sultan's dancer." Wonderful!
Wowww💖 and he does it so gracefully too! I adore the opening line to this poem 😊
Gosh, how well all of this fits together, the music, the video and then your words pulling it all together. Thanks for sharing this.
This was completely mesmerizing. Loved the way your poem focused me in on his footwork and the way he found his wave. Just a lovely way to spend the morning. :)
We should all have passions we love exploring, no matter how old we get.
I am glad he is still passionate about the sea!
I would have believed these mighty images even without the video, but with it, I became mesmerized!
I do not have sound on my puter on purpose. But I loved the visual. Your words so short, so brief, yet so very long.
With or without the visual, your poem is perfect.
What is it about surfing that makes a man love the sea for decades? All the surfers I know love the sea--
Such a delight!
ReplyDeleteWhat an intriguing and beautiful poem Rall. I read it first before playing the music only to find after how well the clip and music fitted the poem.
ReplyDeleteOld people need not lose their long-time loves, right?
ReplyDeleteOoh, that first line invites you to be a spectator of this delightful dance and the musical accompaniment is such a perfect match.
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Such a beautiful description. I especially love "with the slow grace of a javanese sultan's dancer." Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWowww💖 and he does it so gracefully too! I adore the opening line to this poem 😊
ReplyDeleteGosh, how well all of this fits together, the music, the video and then your words pulling it all together. Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteThis was completely mesmerizing. Loved the way your poem focused me in on his footwork and the way he found his wave. Just a lovely way to spend the morning. :)
ReplyDeleteWe should all have passions we love exploring, no matter how old we get.
ReplyDeleteI am glad he is still passionate about the sea!
ReplyDeleteI would have believed these mighty images even without the video, but with it, I became mesmerized!
ReplyDeleteI do not have sound on my puter on purpose. But I loved the visual. Your words so short, so brief, yet so very long.
ReplyDeleteWith or without the visual, your poem is perfect.
ReplyDeleteWhat is it about surfing that makes a man love the sea for decades? All the surfers I know love the sea--
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