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Sunday, September 16, 2018

When Shadow Chases Light



Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #50 Rabindranath Tagore's "where shadow chases light"




This my delight,

thus to wait and watch at the wayside

where shadow chases light

and the rain comes in the wake of the summer


Messengers, with tidings from unknown skies,

greet me and speed along the road.

My heart is glad within,

and the breath of the passing breeze is sweet.


From dawn till dusk I sit here before my door,

and I know that of a sudden

the happy moment will arrive when I shall see.


In the meanwhile I smile and I sing all alone

In the meanwhile the air is filling with the perfume of promise 


Rabindranath Tagore

A haiku and troiku based on the above poem.



 Haiku

it is promised

the wren's lone song will survive

amidst the struggle



Troiku

it is promised

dark storm clouds will not prevail

the light will shine through



the wren's lone song will survive

in spite of frosts and whirlwinds

snowdrops will emerge



amidst the struggle


an angel will throw a life raft

of compassion and love







15 comments:

  1. Yes... Yes... And great choice for your inspiration to... Your delicate forms of hope lovely to read on a Sunday afternoon.

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  2. Beautiful pieces that fit so well together

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  3. This is a joyful piece for this morning

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  4. Oh this is gorgeously written! 💜💜

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  5. We thrive, I think, by clinging to what is promised, even if we see no indication that the promise will come true. Creatures of hope we are!

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  6. It is amazing what can inspire such beautiful poetry. Lovely read Rall.

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  7. I like the "air filled with the perfume of promise". Breathe deeply!

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  8. I LOVE the beauty of your haiku - especially the wren's lone song surviving. With all the disasters going on right now, it is good to know some will survive.

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  9. Great transition in styles, not to mention them being well written. : )

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  10. I enjoyed every part of this post. Thank you.

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  11. How beautiful and meaningful all this is and how well you have put it all together; most enjoyable.

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  12. This is chicken soup for the soul. You captured the quiet longing that always seems to come with autumn.

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  13. Excellent troiku Rall I love how your story has evolved into a masterpiece.

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