Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, February 20, 2021

Already Dead - Earthweal Weekly Challenge

 

 

saturday  evening on the beach

getting our feet wet 

watching the waves

as the breeze whips up the salty spray

to the cries of seagulls


the day  i am not bowled over

by the magnificence of  God's creation

know i am already dead 


Writers' Pantry # 58



10 comments:

  1. Yes indeed. Happy Sunday Rall. Thanks for droppibg by my blog today

    Much💗love

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  2. How true! The magnificence of God's creation is ALWAYS before our eyes, but most often we do not see it!

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  3. I concur, 100%. Feeling bowled over by nature is a great emotion!

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  4. I'm with you in this poem. I too will be dead if I am not awed by the magnificence of nature. I like how you responded to Brian's prompt. I couldn't think of how to approach it.

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  5. This gives me such a sad feeling Yes to be dead alive is the worst feeling

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  6. "the day I am not bowled over / by the magnificence of God's creation / know I am already dead" Indeed!

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  7. Your words are magnificent! Such feeling in them! Big Hugs my friend!

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  8. The words are beautiful and remind us all of God's extraordinary work.

    Have a super week.
    Greetings from Indonesia.

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