Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, May 14, 2022

Sunday Muse # 210

 


message in a bottle

great song ...sting

falling about 

dancing at

arthur's night club

gosh

more than 30 years ago 

no one can be that old



 

her beautiful hair 

as thick as a rope

cancer changed that



a pale green karman ghia

only $700

she wanted it

she would dream about it

she still remembers it

he said NO



poor little wren

waiting at the wharf

she missed the boat again



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12 comments:

  1. You have taken the images and seen and written as only you do Rall. I especially like the rope one even though it is sad.

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  2. Wonderful interpretations, Rall. I resonate with the "he said no" one especially.

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  3. I enjoyed all of these. Love that song Message in a Bottle by Sting. Now, it is looping in my head.

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  4. I enjoyed your thoughtbytes on each of these, especially the rope being likened to hair.

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  5. Great medley - love how the photos spoke to you.

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  6. These emotions built for me, from the reminiscence in the beginning to what started to feel like a series of regrets brought up afterward.

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  7. Some nice ones. Luv the wren poem best of the lot. Anticipation, loneliness, disappointment s neatly blended.

    Happy Sunday

    Much💛love

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  8. How adroitly you have used all the images!

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  9. She should not have accepted the "No".

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  10. my favorite is the first, partly because it reminds me of my own youth. wonderful how you wrote to every single image...i commend you!

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  11. for me, also, the rope pen tolls hard ~

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