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Thursday, January 12, 2023

Whirligig # 405


 


these entrancing  wings 

of  desperate desire are

making my head spin

like glitter in a snow globe 


this longing is

breaking my heart

the distress is not worth it

the cost of this freight is too high

 

i must find a renewed joy 

in something else

laundry liquid cross word puzzles

anything at all

 to rid myself of this scourge

 

THIS WEEK"S WORDS come from " A GULL GOES UP" by Leonie Adams:

 liquid, head, glitter, wings, desperate, distress, heart, cost, entrancing, longing, desire, freight
 


 

5 comments:

  1. So clever, how you craft the given words into a poetic whole! Ha ha, I like the ironic finding of joy in such things as not only crossword puzzles but even laundry liquid (as indeed we can do). And Billie Holiday is always worth a listen.

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  2. Laundry liquid? Now, that is desperate. But I can feel the freight cost.

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  3. Well written and yes longing is not worth the pain But laundry isn't much better haha

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  4. That kind of longing can become poisonous.

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  5. Crossword puzzles seem more joyous to me, but some sort of liquid soap did use to be called "Joy"...

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