Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, October 18, 2023

What's Going On !

 change your hotel then

was her response to complaints

we didn't of course


we were spoilt rotten

we were on a good wicket

thanks to poor ole gran

6 comments:

  1. haha Poor old gran. I am a gran and spoiling is such fun though

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  2. Love the jovial mood specially in the end.

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  3. Ah yes, grans do tend to spoil their grands indeed!

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  4. I love "we were on a good wicket".......and I know well how poor ole gran feels.........we grans are good at spoiling. Smiles.

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  5. I had to look up "we were on a good wicket"! It rather makes the poem work (thanks to poor ole Gran"), as the choices are real to stay or to leave. Bravo!

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  6. Good write Rall, enjoyed it my friend… 👍🏼✌🏼

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