the stars
will only shine
when you return to me
i have disappeared into the
darkness
I feel the pain ...
Wow! Succinctly nailing it.
Sorrow vividly and succinctly expressed. Like Helen I feel the pain
You're both in my prayers.
Thank you Dodo.
Neat form. Yes, I think you nailed it. Perfect words for starry night.
Boom... Rall You use this form very powerful to deliver this aching truth. Brave, bold writing...
Beautiful and yearning, Rall.
I feel the pain ...
ReplyDeleteWow! Succinctly nailing it.
ReplyDeleteSorrow vividly and succinctly expressed. Like Helen I feel the pain
ReplyDeleteYou're both in my prayers.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dodo.
DeleteNeat form. Yes, I think you nailed it. Perfect words for starry night.
ReplyDeleteBoom... Rall You use this form very powerful to deliver this aching truth. Brave, bold writing...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and yearning, Rall.
ReplyDelete