Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Monday, April 1, 2024

Tanka Tuesday NO 27

SOUTHERN HEMISPHERE 

  KIGO WORDS

 "new coolness" (shinryoo early autumn )

"autumn colours"( shuushoku all autumn )

 "remaining heat" ( zansho  early autumn )

 

there's a new coolness
time to find some warmer clothes
where did she put them
it's the same thing every year she must be more organised

 

 


 

 

 


 

autumn moves slowly
the leaves have not fallen yet
it will happen soon
autumn colours red and gold
something to look forward to

 


 

it is easter soon
the remaining heat is great
still swimming weather
it's your birthday on friday
seventy is not that old

he's a bookish bloke

loves red wine and camembert 

a wine and cheese guy


Jonathan Wolstenholme

4 comments:

  1. Rall, your poetry is fabulous! Happy Birthday to you! 🥳 Have a lovely day. 💖

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  2. Its not my birthday Colleen....it's the birthday of friend...a tall grey and handsome bookish bloke:)

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  3. Must be a nice sort of guy. On the surface, at least.

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    1. Yep....Pretty good for a little Aussie battler !

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