Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, October 30, 2024

Tankas


many years ago

cute little girls wore dresses

ribbons in their hair

it's been half a century

since she's worn a pretty dress



technology rules

our world has changed forever

we have lost a lot

tech advantage at a cost

maybe the costs are too high



we learnt french at school

it was a good fun lesson

with madame mercier

it would have been more fun if

she had taught us words like this



a box of darkness

an unwanted gift for sure

you are wrong mary

this person was a toxin

and not worthy of your love



FRIDAY WRITINGS 151

https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com



6 comments:

  1. I think you're right about Mary. I have been looking back over boxes of darkness I've received, and cannot find the gifts.

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  2. I remember those dresses (and red shoes, too). And I agree with the fact that terrible people gifting darkness aren't worth our time. Still, some gifts can't be returned, so we might as well do the best we can with them--even if the giver are best forgotten.

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  3. I'm so glad I wasn't the only one not seeing the gift! I like very much how you put it, only a toxic friend would give you a box of darkness and expect you to find light in it.

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    1. I like to think of the analogy 'If you lend someone 20 dollars and never see them again then it was probably worth it'

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  4. What a emotive and reflective poem - it scanned a whole lot of feelings in such a succinct and coherent form - Jae

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  5. I think a lot of students would learn languages faster if allowed to learn how to say rude things! Je deteste les classes de francais. La escuela es asquerosa. Etc.

    Or should learning that kind of thing be an unadvertised reward for learning to say nicer things?

    PK

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