Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, September 16, 2025

TANKA TUESDAY CHALLENGE # 30

 


SEOX 


morning dew
glistening tears in my heart
separated  apart
without the  hope of
ever being
 together



spring has come
enjoy the yellow wattle
sunshine and the sea breeze
balmy nights ahead
ditch the cactus
forever
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5 comments:

  1. D. AverySeptember 17, 2025 at 4:28 PM

    ditch the cactus! Yes, dew as you must!

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  2. rallentandaSeptember 17, 2025 at 4:48 PM

    LOL

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  3. SelmaSeptember 19, 2025 at 2:10 AM

    ditch the cactus, please. Lovely poetry.

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  4. Sunflower Tanka AnthologySeptember 19, 2025 at 9:15 AM

    I love this so much, Rall. It's poignant, yet brings a smile to your face. ☮️

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  5. Yvette M CalleiroSeptember 21, 2025 at 6:03 PM

    Wonderful poems, Rall!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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