try peace balance flat give share hope beauty flat happy dedicate understand
she would find peace
try to be happy
in her little flat
dedicating herself to the beauty
of poetry and music
giving it her all
balancing life the best way she could
but she had no one to share it with
and understood
there was no hope of ever doing so
of poetry and music
giving it her all
balancing life the best way she could
but she had no one to share it with
and understood
there was no hope of ever doing so
Thanks for joining in with your poem.
ReplyDelete"no one to share it with" There it is in a nutshell! The reason I like blogging poetry and so many things that help me not feel all alone.
ReplyDeleteYou have really expressed the loneliness of aloneness. A vivid picture.
ReplyDeleteThis resonates with me. I am a hermit, mostly happily, but there have been times when I have wondered why I have been so much alone.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad we all have each other here in this community - perhaps part of our worlds are fulfilled here..a return hang-in there from Jae
ReplyDeleteOh that line jumps out "but she had no one to share it with" A stong poem
ReplyDeleteWell, expressed Rall. Just as well we have groups like this where we can share feelings like this...
ReplyDelete"but she had no one to share it with"... The words depict loneliness so very strongly.
ReplyDeleteWell said, Rall. I am so grateful for our poetry 'family'.
ReplyDeleteme too
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