you enter my thoughts
time after time
if you fall i will catch you
i'll be with you
time after time
i may teeter gasp
but I will never let you go
you are the shadow
half caught
in the corner of my eye
the distant wistful thought
on my pillow at night
when it's time
i will take your hand
swan dive with you
bathed in sunshne and smiles
into the starched white crest
of a giant ocean wave
May how you envision it so beautifully one faraway day actually unfold.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful and tender imagery - may you always dream- Jae
ReplyDeleteOh, how I love and identify with this! Masterful use of the borrowed phrase.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful touching poem
ReplyDeleteNicely done, R, and smooth insertion of lyrics. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThat's beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBeing with someone special in dreams has much to recommend it.
ReplyDeletevery beautiful poem .... who knew the night has so much to offer
ReplyDeleteA beautiful, thoughtful, and enticing love poem.
ReplyDeleteSweet. I especially love the third stanza.
ReplyDeletevery beautiful...
ReplyDeleteI love the last stanza, so lovely. I haven't heard Tuck & Patti in ages. Thanks for that!
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