Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, March 17, 2026

Tanka Tuesday # 56.... NONET



mother bear loves her little baby
both of them are now endangered
they both could become extinct
we must stop clearing land
destroying their homes
they live in trees
eat gum leaves
let them 
live


6 comments:

  1. Rall your use of short, punchy lines creates a sense of breathlessness and urgencyπŸ™Œ

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  2. Great poem, Rall! It would be a shame if we allow them to go extinct.

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  3. hello Rall... is has been a fair while since coming by and so sweet to see you writing... i can't help but wonder ... is there not enough eucalyptus trees in Australia for the koalas to exist in peace... mankind we are a selfish people...

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  4. Rall, this is an excellent nonet. I feel the urgency of your message through your word choices. Such sweet animals. ❤️

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  5. Oh yes, please let them live ...πŸ’ž

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  6. We must protect all. πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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