WHAT IT IS THAT MUSIC IS TRYING TO SAY
the grief
the enormous loss
the pain of losing you
all the fibres of my being
broken
how am i supposed to go on
it's just not possible
without you the love of
my life
the enormous loss
the pain of losing you
all the fibres of my being
broken
how am i supposed to go on
it's just not possible
without you the love of
my life
This is the stark emotional reality of loss - the short lines and fragmented structure mirror the sense of being broken and overwhelmed - so raw 💔
ReplyDeleteMy sister-in-law was hit and killed by a train last night. We are devastated. Your poem said it all.
ReplyDeleteMy deepest sympathy for you and yours. Take care of each other.
DeleteThis is such a heart-wrenching poem, Rall.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a heart-wrenching poem, Rall.
ReplyDeletepowerful poem! with every word mattering
ReplyDeleteI can completely connect the music with your poem, Rall! Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
So raw and powerful. Excellent poem.
ReplyDeleteRall, the image of every fibre of your being breaking around the loss of your beloved made my heart ache for you. 💙
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Very emotional poem!
ReplyDeletehi, Rall❣️
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Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com