FRIDAY WRITINGS # 235....POETS AND STORY TELLERS UNITED
a hidden gem in the harbour sees us come and go centuries in centuries out forever constant holds many memories including a wedding ring diamonds are certainly not a girl's best friend
Ah yes, the ocean rolls on forever, whereas we are so brief and inconstant. I like the caustic, almost throw-away wit of the ending, if not the fact it tells.
Ah yes, the ocean rolls on forever, whereas we are so brief and inconstant. I like the caustic, almost throw-away wit of the ending, if not the fact it tells.
ReplyDeleteA sting of salt water at the end but I love how you have portrayed the idea that the sea is eternal - Jae
ReplyDeleteA great conclusion and a beautiful piece of nature Indeed a gem
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