PANTOUM FORMAT
1- A B C D
2 -B E D F
3- E G F H
4 -G C H A
RETURN TO WINTER
lying in my bed
i look out at a grey sky
keeping warm and cosy
trees waving in the wind
i look out at a grey sky
on this cold spring day
trees waving in the wind
cuddling my purring cat
on this cold spring day
i am staying indoors
cuddling my purring cat
cancelling all appointments
i am staying indoors
keeping warm and cosy
cancelling all appointments
lying in my bed
Me too
ReplyDeleteI dont blame you one bit. This is a lovely pantoum, Rall.
ReplyDeleteLove that plan you have, Rall. It sounds divine! 😸
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful.
ReplyDeletei am staying indoors
cuddling my purring cat
cancelling all appointments
These lines are beautiful.
ReplyDeletei am staying indoors
cuddling my purring cat
cancelling all appointments
This poem so thoroughly shows one who does not want to leave a warm cozy bed on a chilly gray day! The cat makes it nigh impossible to get up. So relatable.
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