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Friday, April 23, 2010

A Woman Scorned

Napowrimo poem Day 24
Prompt: Phrases from Shakespeare

This poem is for all those poets who dismiss Shakespeare as being irrelevant and who disdain Bardolatry.

Anne Hathaway (Will's wife) could be responsible for this:)

O mistress mine
it is thou who hast shot thine wing tipped poison
into the hearts of our fair faced poets
O wretched canker blossom
Thanks to thine evil witch hag curse
they loveth not the Bard

I have bestowed on them gifts
miraculous verse
ripples of silver and gold
in pearl shimmer'd utterance
Their eyes now blinkered
gaze downwards at grunt and sweat
under a weary life

How sharper than a serpent's tooth it is
to have a thankless child
What an ass am I in salad days to
have made the beast with two backs
and not portent the heartache and a thousand
natural shocks that followed
Such wicked revenge is steeped in malice
O vile strumpet
And all because of the second best bed

Note: From Shakespeare's will
' I gyve unto my wyfe my second best bed'

20 comments:

  1. I wonder who got his best bed...
    Anne has much to answer for.
    Happy Birthday Will (belated greetings from yesterday).

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  2. This is clever.

    http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com

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  3. Absolutely awesome ... I don't think I can write my poem today after reading this, Rall ...

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  4. it must have been an interesting life =)

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  5. Awesome, Rall! Really wonderful.

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  6. Thanks Derrick, I love Shakespeare. I think it shows.

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  7. Great job blending your words with the Bard's.

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  8. Wonderful! The stars do avail upon you of their demanding portent, as wine floweth from o'er-vaunting Dippers.

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  9. Loved this, and your gift for mingling the classic and contemporary.

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  10. That is lovely novaheart.
    Thanks everyone from me and Will. He has sent you all a message...Says, keep writing and read more Shakespeare.

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  11. You've done a great job of assembling these phrases. I didn't realize that Anne was to blame for Will's bad rep :). I guess the curse didn't work on me... I've been a Bardolator since first reading MacBeth as a pre-teen.

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  12. I like it! My favorite images are "canker blossom" and "pearl shimmer'd utterance." The language of this poem was really beautiful to read aloud, too! :)

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  13. I do not read Shakespeare....but certainly appreciate....anywyas thanks again for sharin this Rall

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  14. Ah, his best bed was whichever had not his wife in it. Fantastic!

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  15. Fantastic!!! I too love Shakespeare! I would love to use this in my poetry unit (teaching). Could I???

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  16. Sure you can Lori.Use anything to turn the little darlings on to Shakespeare.

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