bunyi mata asing menyebar
mimpi tercemar dan turis
dari pulau ke pulau
ah sandiwara ini
ini pun terlalu lama
saya tenggelam
tanpa jangkar saya
tanpa teman saya
saya benar-benar sendirian
tanpa anda
TAINTED DREAM
foreign currency spreads
tainted dreams and tourists
from island to island
ah this charade
this long drawn out play
i'm drowning
without my anchor
without my friend
i'm utterly alone
without you
I love this! The first three lines are really beautiful.
ReplyDeletewell expressed passion, blessings.
ReplyDeleteThis is so sad and yes so true you are really alone when they are gone
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very well expressed emotion of missing a loved one.
ReplyDeleteprofound and personal all at the same time. nice write!
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