The female of the species is certainly more deadly than the male..no offence to the men amongst us..nicely done..as ever..Jae ;)
Thanks JaeRed and Rudd simmera volcanic eruptionabout to happenand sealed with a kiss
is that a knife in your pocket...ha...just be careful where he sticks it....
powerful words.
Very cleverly done!
Clever and sharp - even without the knife :-)
Very sharp indeed.
I'm getting worried now, but dare I say I love the last line?!!
The last line is Shakespeare's. In fact three out of the four are Will's.Nothing to worry about...just politics Andy!
great piece.
clever indeed.
love your blog,come join our poetry picnic week 9 today,first time participants can share 1 to 3 random poems.Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome. Hope to see you in.Best!xoxox
The female of the species is certainly more deadly than the male..no offence to the men amongst us..nicely done..as ever..Jae ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae
ReplyDeleteRed and Rudd simmer
a volcanic eruption
about to happen
and sealed with a kiss
is that a knife in your pocket...ha...just be careful where he sticks it....
ReplyDeletepowerful words.
ReplyDeleteVery cleverly done!
ReplyDeleteClever and sharp - even without the knife :-)
ReplyDeleteVery sharp indeed.
ReplyDeleteI'm getting worried now, but dare I say I love the last line?!!
ReplyDeleteThe last line is Shakespeare's. In fact three out of the four are Will's.
ReplyDeleteNothing to worry about...just politics Andy!
great piece.
ReplyDeleteclever indeed.
ReplyDeletelove your blog,
ReplyDeletecome join our poetry picnic week 9 today,
first time participants can share 1 to 3 random poems.
Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.
Hope to see you in.
Best!
xoxox