Rallentanda
Wednesday, April 18, 2012
Thrill Seeker
3 word wednesday...dependence,rumple, kept
Ride the Wave Babe
the mantra
rhythmically pounding
like bongo drums
in his head
he just kept going
kept arching forward
his hair rumpled
by the gale force wind
whistling through his ears
his heart in his mouth
that dependence on
the thrill
the thrill
the thrill
could kill
but blissing out
on the ride was
staying alive
staying alive
staying alive
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powerful poetry ~ lots of visuals in the words ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteOh yes..without thrill whipping through our hair how do we know we have to keep staying alive..words like a heart beat..strong..Jae
ReplyDeletelove how you can visualize all of this.
ReplyDeleteI'm sure many can relate to this one.
ReplyDeleteEach of us has that place of exhilaration. I loved the repeated mantras in this piece; "the thrill" then "staying alive".
ReplyDeleteVery cool!
ReplyDeleteinvigorating! I smell salt in the air!
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