Your alliterations and crisp sounds build a fine poem. The treatment of the outcry is fascinating and you pack a punch through excellent word choices. I especially loved 'scrinched wound gutted'.
great use of cerising...i had to look that up...and the waves would surely be pinking...the cri-de-cour---an impassioned protest makes an interesting turn in this once you know what it means...
Your alliterations and crisp sounds build a fine poem. The treatment of the outcry is fascinating and you pack a punch through excellent word choices. I especially loved 'scrinched wound gutted'.
ReplyDeletegreat use of cerising...i had to look that up...and the waves would surely be pinking...the cri-de-cour---an impassioned protest makes an interesting turn in this once you know what it means...
ReplyDelete"cerising" sweet!
ReplyDeleteHiya,
ReplyDeleteThought to myself: "Now what I want is a nice short snappy poem".
And here it is! Hurrah. A tidbit, tappas, a petit-four with lovely centres.
s and c are also semi-alliterations very smart
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