Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, June 10, 2012

Haiku Heights

crumbling lime stone rock
ordinary to look at
magic to work with


how ordinary
said the surprised vicar
no,they are not mine

ordinary lives
contain ordinary thoughts
bland colour free zone

if i were a bird
i would be a canary
plain ordinary





9 comments:

  1. Perfect set of haiku ~ Simplicity is beautiful sometimes ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  2. Often, within the ordinary is the magic! Very beautiful descriptions!

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  3. First haiku does the trick!, good set :)

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  4. First one really casts a magic on the whole set :) wonderfully crafted :)

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  5. Well I don't call it the universe..I am more likely to call it the creative force or God. And the answer is Yes. And thank you for asking:)

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  6. I can't help but wonder what it is/they are that doesn't/don't belong to the vicar...

    Ordinary Day

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  7. I was wondering if someone would mention this.
    I will leave it to you vivid imagination MMT .
    Possibly an item in the lingerie dept:)

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