Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, June 30, 2012

Haiku Heights

luxury does not
fill the infinite abyss
devoid of love

shrouds have no pockets
true,money makes friends
until you lose it

love is elusive
found in true romance novels
rarely in real life

satan  creeps along
disguised as golden sunshine
hiding dark rain clouds

raining on my life
a wet soggy mackintosh
in need of fierce heat

true friendship like heat
emanates from the sun with
warmth loyalty love


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11 comments:

  1. NAWALJune 30, 2012 at 3:14 AM

    Love the last one so lovely haiku set... the last one however is like a parable to the whole.. :) great one!

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  2. Rosie GanJune 30, 2012 at 4:45 AM

    Love the last haiku in your set. Meaningful!
    Rosie

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  3. PranitaJune 30, 2012 at 5:22 AM

    I like the last haiku a lot!
    Dew drops of the dawn!

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  4. carol l mckJune 30, 2012 at 6:20 AM

    true friend emanates .... ~ lovely line ~ Wonderful haiku ~thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. TigerbriteJune 30, 2012 at 6:57 AM

    I like them all and the last best. True everything emanates from the sun, source of life.

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  6. joanneJune 30, 2012 at 7:56 AM

    As others said, the last stanza rings so true for me - someone who has had trouble finding a true friend, but now has succeeded! Lovely wording throughout....

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  7. Tarun MazumdarJune 30, 2012 at 8:58 PM

    I love the second one... when money starts to define your friendship and relationship... then you know what you should do...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/06/true-haiku-jule-1-2012.html

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  8. rallentandaJuly 1, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    Thank you all for your comments.

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  9. Jaideep RaoJuly 3, 2012 at 7:06 AM

    Love the comparison that goes on, very true!

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  10. kaykualaJuly 3, 2012 at 5:01 PM

    Well said, Rallen! True love certainly is elusive.A driving force that can bring a Romeo and Juliet thing! Wonderful take!

    Hank

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  11. Amrit SinhaJuly 4, 2012 at 12:50 PM

    Your last haiku says it all ... friendship really provides life with much needed warmth :-)

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