that feeling of
dark yellow ochre
sliced with freezing
shards of wind from
the south pole
sleet
dark skies
lonely rain
gloom with
pointillist
light tips
from cars
last man walking
aftermath
of a nuclear
apocalypse
the next stop
hades
at the bottom
of the world
i didn't expect the aftermath of a nuclear apocalypse but it def. works well to add some darker shades to the ochre for sure
ReplyDeleteAva Gardner said Melbourne was the perfect place to make a movie about the end of the world. I think she was right!
ReplyDeletenice...great image this...gloom with
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light tips
from cars...and then i really like your explanation in the next stanza...cool piece...huh interesting she said melbourne, having never been there that might make me want to go all the more...smiles.
Ha..for me it's a good compatibility test. I know I am not sympatico with anyone who likes Melbourne.
ReplyDeleteI'm shivering and it's almost 100 F here. Beautifully portrayed.
ReplyDeleteMy poetry is better than air con:)
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