Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, January 19, 2013

Haiku Heights

that sinking feeling
at dusk always missing you
a painful dull ache

footprints in the sand
washed away in the king tide
forbidden feelings

sand through my fingers
no substance at all really
dusk turns into night
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13 comments:

  1. J Cosmo NewberyJanuary 19, 2013 at 3:16 AM

    These have a feeling of loss and regret.

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  2. anthonynorthJanuary 19, 2013 at 3:28 AM

    Melancholy but a great read.

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  3. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 3:33 AM

    Your words pulled me right into that sinking feeling!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2013 at 4:25 AM

    Forbidden feeling... wow.. diabolical thoughts

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  5. kaykualaJanuary 19, 2013 at 4:47 AM

    Dusk to night has always that sinking feeling, a feeling of wanting to have more and better for tomorrow! Nicely Rallen!

    Hank

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  6. rallentandaJanuary 19, 2013 at 6:01 AM

    What are you on unshakenthoughts ?!

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  7. Judith WesterfieldJanuary 19, 2013 at 10:55 AM

    "Sand through my fingers" - such a complete expression of dusk

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  8. WabiSabiJanuary 19, 2013 at 12:20 PM

    Pensive, sad---like dusk sometimes is!

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  9. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsJanuary 19, 2013 at 1:04 PM

    A sad, yearning, beautiful set of haiku! "Forbidden feelings" suggests that perhaps there is quite a great deal of pain beneath the surface!

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2013 at 4:45 PM

    Lovely. "The sinking feeling at dusk." Every day. Thanks. Alice

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  11. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:45 AM

    longing, solitude are often associated with dusk!
    Lovely haiku.

    Perpetual Dusk

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  12. Reading PleasureJanuary 21, 2013 at 7:29 AM

    lovely haiku

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  13. rallentandaJanuary 23, 2013 at 8:15 AM

    Thank you everyone for your very nice comments!

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