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Sunday, June 2, 2013

Rictameter for Rinkly Rimes

         




Brenda Bryant



image from rinklyrimes.blogspot.com


                so sad
       when someone leaves
    who's been around for years
 Rinkly Rimes has closed down her blog
  no comments at all for her ' au revoir '
 she may have closed the comment box
          i hope this is the case
           she has been sick
                  so sad


               her work
             is a treasure
       so have a look sometime
  at a poet's dreams, humour and long life
        experience  of times gone by
       Rinkly Rimes good fun times
              don't miss out on
                   her work

8 comments:

  1. Yes, it is sad when people go; life changes, for whatever reason. I still wonder what became of Henry the Dog and his owner, or the amazing Lillie. Percy Bysshe Silly I know and watch his slow decay via Facebook, there are and were many good people out there. I think I will go to bed.

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  2. Lovely concrete poem. Have you tried writing tanka? I reckon that writing form would suit you. I was also very encouraged to see you blog about haiku; I love haiku!!! Keep writing :)

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    1. i like tanka form
      its tight conciseness suits my
      personality
      one can make a strong statement
      in a few well chosen words

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  3. So sad to hear this news. Rinkly Rimes had (and I hope, still has) a great sense of humor.

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    1. Thank you for replying. Yes it is sad. These virtual connections can disappear overnight.

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