Rallentanda
Wednesday, June 26, 2013
Anyone For Tennis?
Theme Thursday and Poetry Jam
a smooth operator
is the knickerbocker glory
of the male homo sapiens species
one tends to over indulge
resulting in heart burn
and feeling unwell
he is visually tempting
an exotica of sensory sensations
rich and a bit too sweet
in spite of Jenny Craig
and Weight Watchers
most women
cannot resist the allure
reoffenders are multiple
a smooth operator
is never insecure
so
if you think this poem
is about you
then you are not
a smooth operator
and certainly not in
the knickerbocker glory class
(scrumptious)
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the good news is...i dont gotta be the knickerbocker glory of anyone other than the one i got...so i am good...smiles.
ReplyDeleteOh dear, I fall into the re-offender category ...
ReplyDeleteMe too:)
DeleteIf I said you're a crazy, Brian.I hope you would not think that I am trying to launch an attack ,attempting to demolish you .And if I have to preface all my responses like this there is no point in responding to anyone. So I am just going to respond naturally and suggest that anyone who is offended ( unintentional on my part)simply does not return to wicked Rall's coven:)
ReplyDeleteIncidentally I do think you're a crazy...highest form of praise from Rall.
i could think of worse things to be called...smiles..and no need to preface your responses...just be you...someone may think you crazy then...smiles.
DeleteEveryone knows I'm crazy, Brian!
DeleteThe joy of over indulgence, that's the key to the smooth operator. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteChortles!
DeleteIt's all about flattery. Everyone wants to be admired. It is fine for the beautiful people but how us others crave for that little taste of ice-cream in our lives.
ReplyDeleteHandsome is as handsome does...it seems everyone knows this except for men. Those rare charming clever men who are not necessarily the lookers are sought after and cherished. Everyone has had their fill of bastards.Your welcome.. No charge for Rall's counselling service o:)
ReplyDeleteOne should be careful so as not to fall prey!!
ReplyDeleteHa... over-indulging in anything may make one feel unwell. I enjoyed your indulgence!
ReplyDeleteI was here.
ReplyDeleteFun. In the middle, I thought it was going to be something like twinkies--but then your narration widened, and, no, I did not see me at all--but I the idea of being an operator (other than in poetry) makes me giggle.
ReplyDeleteThere are smooth operators in the female branch of the homo sapiens species too!
ReplyDeleteNone of them are as smooth as you are Birdy Boy :)
DeletePoint proven ... x
DeleteIt took me nine months to wrestle you away from that Camel driver...keep this up and I'll be sending you back :)
DeleteVery clever!! Those smooth operators are irresistible aren't they? ;-)
ReplyDeleteGiggles!
DeleteRules me out.
ReplyDeleteSorry..I'm feeling a little seismic today. Tsunamis have that effect on me
DeleteYes, I can see things are moving about a bit for you.
DeleteHeart burn is something of which I totally understand since I have had to deal with it for so many years now. And all of my grandsons think they are the smoothest talkers around. Judging by all the girls constantly texting them I wonder how any of them think they are smooth talkers since there seems to be no talking going on. Texting just doesn't seem to be the same as actually talking on the phone. One of the grandsons said his sister is mad at him because she never calls him. I told him she only knows how to text and you have to text her. Silly him. Why does he enjoy all the girls texting him but his sister has to call him. He never calls her. Geez, soon all the smooth talkers will be dead.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing such a fun poem with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. Hope you have a very smooth talking week.
God bless.
Nothing smooth about my week...
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrsupole..have a great weekend!