her name is Ocean
the kids at school laugh at her
her folks are hippies
on the flats roof top
we pretend we are dancing
by the cool ocean
she likes ocean views
washing day is a pleasure
chez shack on the beach
no one is worth it
don't do it,the best revenge
be happy and live!
"i have an ocean
of tears inside of me please
i just want to breathe"
Michael Peterson's words in 2011
That first one hits home - I knew a brother and sister who were Silver and Crystal.
ReplyDeleteYou DO have a Hills Hoist!
I knew Ocean Paradise and Savannah...My chez shack is in the bush...if I win the lottery I will get one on the beach:)
DeleteI bought a $20 ticket and won $12. Back to Plan A.
DeleteI buy one lottery ticket a year...I enjoy spending the imaginary win but the best thing about it is to realise how little I desire now! That is what I tell myself at least:)
DeleteOk. So, same time next year then...?
DeleteOK...next time wear something different...moleskins accentuate a lovely leg line but are a bit passe!:)
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ReplyDeletelike the positive note....
The second one is so romantic and the third one is so unique. clothes left out to dry in the ocean breeze.enjoyed reading them.
ReplyDeletelovely haiku..
ReplyDeletethe last one is too good...
She better be careful with her washing, all done before the tide sets in. Good message in the last one!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic love the variety of images and emotions I experienced in reading each
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